Comments on: Vampire Vacation: Chapter 1

By: W.J. Howard

W.J. Howard — Thu, 08 Jul 2010 21:06:27 +0000

I’m with Gaynor since this is my second time reading as well. Great to have Vampire Vacation here!

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By: C.J. Ellisson

C.J. Ellisson — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 22:44:31 +0000

Thanks for the offer, Gaynor. Wendy came through and worked her magic earlier today. I’ll be contacting you to find out what you’d like me to do about the more explicit bits in chapter 4.

Glad you liked it, Lisa!

Thanks for the kind words, Robert. Hope to see you back for chapter 2!

By: Gaynor

Gaynor — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 21:08:20 +0000

Hi CJ

Although I’ve read the first chapter of Vampire Vacation before I’ve just read again to wet my appetite for the next chapter. I can fix the italics for you if you like. Let me know on the Vamplt Writers’ Group.

By: Robert c. Nelson

Robert c. Nelson — Wed, 07 Jul 2010 01:20:12 +0000

Very nice. Bob likes it! Quite the challenge to combine all the different genres that you have. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

By: Lisa Lane

Lisa Lane — Tue, 06 Jul 2010 22:04:51 +0000

Fun!

By: C.J. Ellisson

C.J. Ellisson — Tue, 06 Jul 2010 19:33:12 +0000

Thanks, Carole! Glad to see you like it. The story starts rather fluffy, but gets darker as it goes along.

Wendy – I take it the site won’t allow italics for how I express the telepathic speech? Wonder how I should fix that on the next installments. Thoughts?

By: carole gill

carole gill — Tue, 06 Jul 2010 18:28:08 +0000

this is hot stuff! Very witty and cute. And i like the style! good going!